Coco beans freshly grounded carefully with care,
It’s rich crisp aroma fills the air.
A smooth creamy dark brown liquid is fills it’s way up.
Soon the snow coloured marshmallow sits at the top of the cup,
The hot porcelain mug is placed on the cold tiled table,
As fresh steam fills the dull kitchen air as soon as it is able.
So on this cold winter night this cup sits still.
Just waiting, so please don’t spill.
Coco beans freshly grounded carefully with care,--this line needs to be re-worked..change grounded and carefully with care.
ReplyDeleteAgain, I notice the same thing here...some good things here but in need of further development.